Well, going only from the quote you posted, it doesn't say the current part time job is at Lynch Road. Maybe he was working a part time job at another factory in HP after leaving Chrysler.
Well, going only from the quote you posted, it doesn't say the current part time job is at Lynch Road. Maybe he was working a part time job at another factory in HP after leaving Chrysler.
Which is why I said this [[assuming that's the case, we don't know)...
In fact, based on how I read the quote, particularly the "as he did every workday" part, they make it seem as if he's was working the Chrysler Lynch Plant in Highland Park all of his life, in which the location alone was incorrect.Even if it's not what they meant, that's not the reader's problem if they couldn't articulate the story correctly.
Congrats to yet another stellar job WJBK!!! Just keep your viewers and reader guessing as to whatever your "journalist" was trying to report.
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