Detroit: Murder on Marlowe St

[Detroitgayhistoryguy]

This is a story I've been working on for about a month. Let me know what you think!

http://www.motorgay.net/2012/03/detr...arlowe-st.html

On a side note: Dr. Loomis's office was at 8620 Grand River. Google street view shows nothing there. Newspapers called it the "Freeman Building" on Grand River. Any pictures of it?

[gazhekwe]

What an interesting story! Thanks for sharing it.

[Gannon]

Nice, and well edited, too...save for one I caught:

In the paragraph which begins, "Dr. Loomis was arrested again" change trail to trial.

Nicely done, compelling...

[Gannon]

This was Detroit's version of The Fugitive...except he didn't run. Same dynamic, but in this case, I think he did it!

[canuck]

Well done DGHG!

[Detroitgayhistoryguy]

Nice, and well edited, too...save for one I caught:

In the paragraph which begins, "Dr. Loomis was arrested again" change trail to trial.

Nicely done, compelling...

Thanks! I can read it 20 times and not see stuff like that.

[mikeinmotown]

Chris I love your blogs. How can I leave you a message on you blogs?

[Gannon]

Thanks! I can read it 20 times and not see stuff like that.

You're in good company. I used to edit a few famous writers, one fella with a Pulitzer. We all need another set of eyes on our stuff!

Cheers!

[Detroitgayhistoryguy]

Chris I love your blogs. How can I leave you a message on you blogs?

Below each post you will see "Comments" click on that, and a comments thingy opens up. I don't like how it works, most people don't see it