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    Default A Valentine To My Babe, tponetom

    A “Valentine,” To My Babe!


    Omar said,
    “A Book of Verses underneath the bough,
    A jug of wine, a loaf of bread--and Thou
    Beside me singing in the
    Wilderness--Oh, Wilderness were Paradise enow.”


    [[My own singular ambition had been, to create a more simplistic, and still a more intense, preamble.
    I took you into the wilderness of the Hiawatha Forest, for twenty-one years and life will never get better than that experience.
    Omar is still the Champ.
    It is now, that time of the year to renew verbal characteristics ,,,,,of love.


    The hot ‘panting’ of former years, becomes a warm murmur, today.


    The frenzied massaging of backs, and, um, other parts, got their share of friction and traction


    .And now, with no chagrin, we share our memories. Some are sentimental, some blatant, a lot of them funny, and some that should be forgotten, but the winding, wistful, withering strength of innovation is no longer needed or challenged. But I keep trying.


    The Citadels of our Hearts have withstood all of the negatives.


    Our energy is now obsolete. Our strength has finally ebbed. We still have a few feeble qualities left. I can hold your hand, ever so gently. We ‘spoon’ in bed, but only to share our body heat. That is the ultimate of intimacy!


    Oh! Thank goodness for memories. How they now satisfy!


    Wishful thinking? If only we were able to revive our carpet capers of long ago, in front of the open fire of our Franklin Stove, with red hot sparks, celebrating their freedom, attacking us, demanding our abilities of new-found bodily contortions, never before discovered.


    Today, I am fading. It is a soft retreat of mind and body. However, a compromise becomes apparent. My recent memory is null and void. But there is no cataclysm that could cloud my early vision of you, standing on the corner, in the early evening moonlight.
    Your radiance dimmed the stars.


    A Note:
    “Oh! By the way, will you be my Valentine? ,,,,,,, Again?
    Yes, I know. It is a little early for a Valentine but at our age, optimism is no longer an option.







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    Perfect .

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    Mmmmm. Wonderful! My anticipation is well rewarded. Thank you for the wonderful trip through time and love.

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    Ravine Guest

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    Cripes!!

    If I am ever even so much as Salieri to Tponetom's Mozart, I will be truly gifted.

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    <sigh>

    So beautiful, TP...thanks for this.


    Much love...

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    Absolutely wonder Tom!

    Your bittersweet wisdom of age is so warmly beautiful.

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    Beautiful, Tom!! Sending sweet Valentine's Day thoughts to you and Peggy!!

    Thanks for giving us "youngsters" a peek into the future and something to strive toward and look forward to!!!

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    "...Today, I am fading. It is a soft retreat of mind and body. However, a compromise becomes apparent. My recent memory is null and void. But there is no cataclysm that could cloud my early vision of you, standing on the corner, in the early evening moonlight.
    Your radiance dimmed the stars...."

    More beautiful words were never put together. Tom and Peggy: Damn, I wish I was a neighbor or friend. I have been a student here, for a few years. Than you for the lessons.

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    BOBI, RAVINE, et, al.
    In the early years, insecurity throttled me. No one was listening, until I began speaking, out loud.
    I had mentioned once before, in this Forum, that if I had caught one, just one, positive voice, out of a thousand, my efforts were worth while.
    By the way Ravine, you chased me to the Encyclopedia, looking for Salieri.
    Of course I found him. I am a Scavenger and a Pack Rat, and being such, I will one day come up with something about him and Mozart, in my words.
    Happy Valentines Day to one and all..

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    t: Met a fellow who grew up on Canton, near Kercheval, in the waiting room at the doctor's office [[WWII era).. Small world. I smiled and thought of dad, and you! Peace.

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