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This is a story I've been working on for about a month. Let me know what you think!
http://www.motorgay.net/2012/03/detr...arlowe-st.html
On a side note: Dr. Loomis's office was at 8620 Grand River. Google street view shows nothing there. Newspapers called it the "Freeman Building" on Grand River. Any pictures of it?
What an interesting story! Thanks for sharing it.
Nice, and well edited, too...save for one I caught:
In the paragraph which begins, "Dr. Loomis was arrested again" change trail to trial.
Nicely done, compelling...
This was Detroit's version of The Fugitive...except he didn't run. Same dynamic, but in this case, I think he did it!
Well done DGHG!
Thanks! I can read it 20 times and not see stuff like that.Quote:
Originally Posted by Gannon
Chris I love your blogs. How can I leave you a message on you blogs?
You're in good company. I used to edit a few famous writers, one fella with a Pulitzer. We all need another set of eyes on our stuff!Quote:
Originally Posted by Detroitgayhistoryguy
Cheers!
Below each post you will see "Comments" click on that, and a comments thingy opens up. I don't like how it works, most people don't see itQuote:
Originally Posted by mikeinmotown