Good job. I understand. Even mentioning the race changes the entire meaning of the statement.Probably about the point where it becomes necessary to mention that the offending parties are black... I mean "Detroiters".
Here's a test:
I changed one little part of his original statement. Does the statement still make sense? Is the reasoning for his family not continuing to go to Sunday brunch at the Hyatt any less clear now? Did it ever matter what city the loud, obnoxious people lived in who crashed Sunday brunch at the Hyatt?
Last edited by Detroitnerd; May-08-12 at 04:32 PM.
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