Quote Originally Posted by East Detroit View Post
Very loose, indeed.

Whitey on the Moon should be replaced by Kwame, rather than compared with him... otherwise you're coming off as somewhat flippant about the concerns on the street by replacing them with someone living large [[as it gave the impression before you explained yourself). Kwame has nothing to do with the man on the street other than helping make things worse by ripping his city off.

Thousands of kids with holes in their shoes... and Kwame's got his Guccis.
Poor nutrition dries up mother's milk... and Carlita's got her silicone.
Living without fresh produce down the corner... and Kwame's grilling Omahas.
Bridge card for a 20 lb bag of rice... and the cashier's check is in the mail.
Great post East Detroit.