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    Default Paging Both Genders, Valentine Time, tponetom

    A “Valentine,” To My Babe!


    Omar said,
    “A Book of Verses underneath the bough,
    A jug of wine, a loaf of bread--and Thou
    Beside me singing in the
    Wilderness--Oh, Wilderness were Paradise enow.”


    [[My own singular ambition had been, to create a more simplistic, and still a more intense, preamble.
    I took you into the wilderness of the Hiawatha Forest, for twenty-one years and life never got better.
    [[Omar is still the Champ.)
    It is now, that time of the year to renew verbal characteristics ,,,,,of love.


    The hot ‘panting’ of former years, becomes a warm murmur, today.


    The frenzied massaging of backs, and, um, other parts, got their share of friction.


    And now, with no chagrin, we share our memories. Some are sentimental, some blatant, a lot of them funny, and some that should be forgotten, but the winding, wistful, withering strength of innovation is no longer needed or challenged. But I keep trying.


    The Citadels of our Hearts have withstood all of the negatives.


    Our energy is now obsolete. Our strength has finally ebbed. We still have a few feeble qualities left. I can hold your hand, ever so gently. We ‘spoon’ in bed, but only to share our body heat. That is the ultimate of intimacy!


    Oh! Thank goodness for memories. How they now satisfy!


    Wishful thinking? If only we were able to revive our carpet capers of long ago, in front of the open fire of our Franklin Stove, with red hot sparks, celebrating their freedom, attacking us, demanding our abilities of new-found bodily contortions, never before discovered.


    Today, I am fading. It is a soft retreat of mind and body. However, a compromise becomes apparent. My recent memory is null and void. But there is no cataclysm that could cloud my early vision of you, standing on the corner, in the early evening moonlight.
    Your radiance dimmed the stars.


    “Oh! By the way, will you be my Valentine? ,,,,,,, Again?


    My Aphasia???? I had a word for it but it escapes me







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    Sweet post!

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    I love this, as I host my Dad at 91, losing short term memory heels over crupper. I see in your posts the same creativity and fire I recognize in my Dad. Thank you so much for reinforcing this.

    To you and Peggy, a warm and happy celebration of all that went into making you the loving pair that you are today.

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    Gazhekwe, Sumas,
    Perhaps we are a dying breed,,,of Romantics!

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    I re read your post and started to cry. Beauty and elegance. Thank you.

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    Well, I sure hope romantics aren't dying out. That would be a shame for this world. Heaven ought to be pretty neat, though.

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    Tom I never read a word you wrote I didn't like. Godspeed.

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